I often get reflective when thinking about perspective...
They say the grass is always greener on the other side.
What the clichés don't say, though,
is that the grass on your side wouldn't be so damn brown
if you just took the time to water it.
The best way to get what you want
is to put in the effort
& to care about what you already have.
I often get reflective when thinking about perspective...
Reminiscing over resurfacing memories,
feelings or emotions I neglected
& pushed aside at the time when they occurred...
I've learned that materialistic tendencies
& extreme objectivity,
can skew our view of reality,
can blind us to what really matters.
Yes, I often get too reflective when I overthink perspective...
Like an over corrective detective,
desperately searching for the most effective,
least subjective method.
But who am I kidding?
It's not complicated.
It isn't a mystery.
Sometimes it's easiest
to just love,
to just live.
Simplicity really is the key
when putting it all into perspective.
Nice voice... I really loved the message here. We do worry too much about what others have; thus, neglecting our own shit
ReplyDeleteThanks man, glad you liked it.
DeleteI don't think a person should overthink anything....including perspective. Smiles. And yes, simplicity IS the key.
ReplyDeleteUnfortunately I make a habit of overthinking everything. But I'm working on it, & that's what this poem symbolizes. Thanks for the comment, Mary.
DeleteMe too! I often get reflective when thinking about perspective. I really enjoyed this gem of a poem, nice rhymes scattered throughout, and a definite message: keep it simple.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind words!
DeleteYes - The other side of the fence is not of our concern.... Let's be ourselves.
ReplyDeleteVery well said.
DeleteHey there Alex, You get no argument from me over this: 'just live...just love..." For sure that os why we are here and yes again it is judderingly simple. Liked your piece... With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Scott.
Deleteto actually see with anothers perspective takes quite a bit of work...communication and listening...seeking understanding...love is easier....though it still takes work...i think it just makes the work a bit easier....often we dont see the challenges on the greener side of the grass...
ReplyDeleteI agree, it definitely makes the work easier. Life is as simple as we want to make it. Thanks for the comment, Brian.
DeleteOver thinking and trying to see every side is so tiring.... I think you are right - Simplicity really is the key when putting it all into perspective. Thankfully, my husband balances me out.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading my work!
DeleteAlex--introspective poem that reveals a lot of self-awareness. And then the freeing, simple ending. Perfect.
ReplyDeleteGlad you enjoyed it, Victoria. Thank you for the kind words.
DeleteWe see greener grass somewhere else, but or neighbours are probably just as jealous about what we have. Love the rhythm to your piece!
ReplyDeleteVery true!
DeleteI love this...there is a lyrical voice to your words that is altogether lovely...but the word choices are also brilliantly chosen and placed and that is so cleverly crafted....and then the whole thing is a meaningful message that is, of course, the conclusion that anyone who overthinks will ever truly, really come to if they give it enough thought: "just love."
ReplyDeleteThank you very much, that means a lot.
DeleteThought provoking poem! And lovely choice of words. The grass is always greener on the other side, we will always see the glass as half empty. Too often, we just forget to relax and enjoy what we have got!
ReplyDeleteThanks, glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteMy yard is so much more beautiful since i quite watering it and fertilizing it and let i grow so much greener with adversity...overcome with greater diversity than ever before...
ReplyDeleteAnd i thought to myself.. i think i'll do that with me...
and it worked.. it was so dam simple... but it worked...:) and continues to do so with a KISS keep it simple stupid.. for me..:)
Keep it simple stupid, indeed. Thanks for the comment!
Deletesimplicity is the key..I agree sometimes we over think..what happened to just feeling the moment..someone once told me the grass is greener until you climb the fence..but, then again sometimes in life you have to take a chance and climb that fence. It's all about perspective.
ReplyDeleteI never thought of it like that, interesting perspective. Thanks for stopping by.
DeleteI really enjoyed this....the rhythm, the message, the structure. Very nice! :)
ReplyDeleteSo glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the comment.
Deletesincere emotions,
ReplyDeletelove the rhyming ending in each line.
Glad you liked it!
Deletelove the word play here.
ReplyDeletethanks.
beautiful thoughts from the mind and the heart. Simplicity is what the world lacks : )
ReplyDeleteCouldn't agree more. Thanks for stopping by!
Deletelove and live, worry free, that's how we cherish,
ReplyDeletethere shall be no threats but competitions, fair grounds, and ideas shifting options,
when one door closes, another door will open.
No threats but competitions, I like that. There's always an opportunity in every difficulty.
Deleteeasy word flow.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment!
DeleteThanks for reading!
ReplyDeletepowerful.
ReplyDelete:)
Thanks for stopping by!
Deletelife and all really is quite simple in the end isn't it?
ReplyDeleteIt's as simple as we make it.
Deletefrank and powerful
ReplyDeleteThank you, Angenette!
Deletetrue interesting striking
ReplyDeleteGlad you could take something away from my poem.
Deleteimpressive thoughts that remind us of things ...sometimes, we need to be educated.
ReplyDeleteWe're all learning as we go. Thanks for the comment!
Deletehow you make things work help you,
ReplyDeletepowerful poetry.
Thanks for the kind words!
DeleteThanks for reading.
ReplyDeletesuperb imagery.
ReplyDeletelovely.
ReplyDelete:)
Thanks. :)
Deletesuperb imagery, the flexibility is the key to have a fruitful life.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the kind comment.
Deletehave an awesome Valentine's day.
ReplyDeleteThanks, you too!
Deletepowerful wording and structure of the poem
ReplyDeletekeep rolling.
Thank you for reading my work!
Deletehello,
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lovely art and story talent, keep posting.
Thanks for the reminder & the encouragement. I'll see ya next week!
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